Before I got into it and color corrected it, this was pretty lousy looking. Mostly green and orange. Horrible matte lines around everything. Dark. Dark in the daytime. People sleep. Sleep in the daytime. If they want to...if they want to.. (sorry, I went into David Byrne mode).
I added some better shadows where the bodies meet, and did a little backlighting as well.
Pay no attention to the position of my hand. There's nothing going on there, nothing at all, I swear!